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Manny's Marbles Critique

I started thinking about the round playful aspect of a marble. Thats how I decided on the soft-edged font that is thick. I molded it to a circle because it showed off the marble aspect. Next I thought of how a marble bounced so I added the motion aspect to my logo. I tried to make the Marble 3D by adding a gleam.

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  1. UnknownSeptember 5, 2017 at 12:37 PM

    I really like your logo, especially the one with the saying in the middle. You are the graphic design master.

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  2. UnknownSeptember 5, 2017 at 12:38 PM

    I love the one with the slogan in the middle, it mixes it up but still looks professional.

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  3. Sabeeha BachelaniSeptember 5, 2017 at 12:43 PM

    I love your tagline in the second one! I like the 3D effect to make it look like a real marble!

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  4. UnknownSeptember 5, 2017 at 12:48 PM

    I like how circular the manny's marbles is like a marble. Maybe try doing more with the bouncing marble one by maybe making it the same kind of soft-edged font.

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  5. Parker RiessSeptember 5, 2017 at 12:56 PM

    I think that they all look great! I like the one with the tagline the best.

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  6. UnknownSeptember 5, 2017 at 12:57 PM

    I really like how the logo looks like a marble and I like the font you used. Your logo looks really good. I would chose the one with the words in the middle of it

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  7. UnknownSeptember 5, 2017 at 3:53 PM

    I'm liking the one with the words in the middle - but the bottom one is good also. The only thing about the bottom one is that it draws my eye to the right too much. Did you try putting the marble in some other location? Or maybe 2 marbles? Nice!

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  8. sadSeptember 6, 2017 at 11:37 AM

    Its cool how you shaped the words into the shape of a marble

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  9. KailiSeptember 6, 2017 at 11:50 AM

    I like the one with the words in the middle, but they all look good.

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  10. UnknownSeptember 6, 2017 at 11:54 AM

    I think that they all look pretty good . I think that having the saying in the middle is a really good idea.

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  11. UnknownSeptember 14, 2017 at 3:45 PM

    All of these logos are really nice and put together. There isn't too much going on, but you still get the idea of what your company is. I really like the second one the "Haven't lost my marbles yet" is a really good touch. It also makes a good emblem rather than the last one, it looks more like a header for a desktop website.

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